Need Criticism/ Aid how to improve
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Started by: Tubbsy1994Tubbsy1994
Date: 15 Feb 2014 17:31
Number of posts: 12
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Summary:
Basically I need help improving my character, I have changed him a lot over the past month. The basic Idea is that he is a Foundation Mobile Task Force Operative who was influenced by an SCP, and is now recovering. I know its really long, like, really long... Yet that is why I have collapsed most of it and intend to create more sub sections, and more interwoven characters. My first Idea was to make him an SCP, which a lot of people responded negatively to, and with good reason, I was an idiot to think that would ever happen. Either way, I thought it would be interesting to have a recovering front line Foundation Operative as a character. Would like feedback + Plot hole problems, i'm not writing these rather outlandish characters to piss anyone off, just trying to push the boundaries. =)
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